Wednesday, 6 June 2012

Generation 5, Chapter 6 : A date gone horribly wrong.


''Ugh, stupid hair why can't you just stay behind me ear.''  I was determined to make myself look even more attractive for my second date with Spencer. Were going to this local bar and then to the beach again. I picked out an snazzy dress too and some black high heels to match the belt. Things were starting to look really good with us, we've been on a date and he has called me about 5 times, ending up having a long and deep conversation which helped me to know him more.I found out that he is from Hidden Springs and is an patrol officer in Starlight shores.


''Well good afternoon Spencer.''

''Hey Jade.'' He playfully pulled me for a hug, my chin hung over his shoulder and above was my mouth, happy smiling away.


''C'mon in Jade let's take some pictures to remember our second date.''


The pictures came out great, though in the second picture Spencer seemed to be struggling to lift me up, wow am I that heavy?


Hours later we were at the beach, splashing around in the sprinkler like six year old's. I saw some people staring at us but I honestly didn't care at all.

''WOO! Go Spencer.'' I cheered him on as he stuck his but in he water causing him to shiver.


We slid and slid some more down the water slide. I kind of made a fool of myself when I slid down it and flew head first into a sand castle built probably by a child. He helped me up and pulled me in for a kiss.


As he kissed I felt his hand touch me but, I thought he was trying to seduce me but then both of his hands dropped and then his lips suddenly went cold.




He then drop to the floor but I quickly caught him. He was out cold, I checked for a pulse, there was none. I checked for any sign of life - There weren't any. His face then went pale.



I pressed his chilled body against mine trying to give him warmth but it just weren't working.

''Please Spencer, don't leave me now... Please.''


~ The End ~

Thanks for reading Chapter 6 of The Cronwell legacy - Please comment guys because you know how much I love comments. I hoped you liked it and a new chapter will be out very soon.

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7 comments:

  1. HOLY MOTHER OF MERCY, WHAT DID I JUST WITNESS? O_O

    That was...unexpected. Similar to what I have planned to the ending of my generation, but not quite. It's AWESOME!

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    1. Thank you very very much Destiny - I needed to add a twist

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  2. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
    WAT JUST HAPPENED!!!!!!!
    IM STILL IN SHOCK!!!!!!

    amazing post btw :)

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    1. Thannk you and I know - It was sudden

      Thanks for commenting

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  3. OMG, noooo Spencey! *cries* Wow! Poor wee Jade! O_O

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  4. OMG!!!!! pls dont let spencer die! that was unexpected o__o

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